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Wednesday, February 26, 2014

Introductory Paragraph
Figure of a women in life
            
           The women are a very important figure in this life. The women is a mother as well, including a human patient women who is full of tenderness and affection. Without the women / mother we will never exist in this world. Even a lot of great people who can never be great without the support of the great female figure behind him. In addition, women also figure highly creative and inspiring. Therefore, women are superior in men in two ways.

·                                  .     Thesis Statements:
Women are superior in men in two ways. 
·         Topic Sentence 
1.      Women can be a better parent. 
2.      Women is figure that can do some work in the same time.


 



Monday, February 24, 2014

ESSAY OUTLINE

ESSAY OUTLINE

The Positive and negative influence of watching television
1          Introductory:
      Television is one of the electronic media is different from other electronic media.

1. Thesis Statement:
       
         Watch television major influence in us, be it positive or negative      
          influence it all depends on the community itself.

2.      Body Paragraph

Subject A : positive influence of watching television .

Supporting detail : gain knowledge and information development era , arises a sense of pleasure , take comfort , stress disappears , and can fill leisure time with family .

Example : in the event of natural disasters , as well as the existing flood in Jakarta while we are outside Jakarta , we can know and can sense the incident , no we do not have to be there .

Subject B : negative influence of watching television .

Supporting detail : cause people to be lazy , kills creativity , uncontrolled event : behavior that is either followed the kids , cause radiation sickness caused by television , and less socializing with their surroundings .

Example : when children watch television shows that show the romance and style of dating is not good , because of fear followed by the children .

3 . Conclusion
Summary of main points : Television is one of the electronic media that provide audio- visual media shape the image of various kinds , as well television is a medium that provides a variety of means in the form of information , education , and entertainment people required by the user and audience . Television also has a wide range of positive and negative influences caused.
Restatement of thesis statement : in short, the actual effect of watching television caused either positive or negative depending on the person himself , when watching television just as a distraction when spare time was not an issue , but if excessive it is not good , and for example if that watching television should children need for supervision from his/her parents.

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The Positive and negative influence of watching Television

INTRODUCTORY PARAGRAPH
Television is one of the electronic media is different from other electronic media. If electronic media such as radio only give his audio course, television can provide audio-visual media images of varying shape and type. In addition, the TV also is a medium that provides a variety of means in the form of information, education, and entertainment that is needed by the user community and the audience. Watching television now it has become public consumption every day, anywhere and anytime. Watch television major influence in us, be it positive or negative influence it all depends on the community itself.